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« on: March 08, 2010, 09:14:02 PM » |
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It is out.
Keeping feedback short here.
Best Moment
Best Face
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MVP of the Night
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« Reply #1 on: March 08, 2010, 11:58:46 PM » |
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Quick note: Chapter II is a bit confusing as it is a repeat from last weeks show
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« Reply #2 on: March 09, 2010, 02:29:24 AM » |
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Quick note: Chapter II is a bit confusing as it is a repeat from last weeks show
...Yeah, I noticed that too. I'm wondering if I accidentally sent the wrong segment. I'm sending the correct one to the WWA Staff address; hopefully it gets corrected... |
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"The Lion" John Grant [7-4-0] Two-time WWA United States Heavyweight Champion (2/12/10-2/19/10; 3/13/10-5/1/10) Graduate of the Inferno Wrestling Academy (2009) Second-Generation Superstar  |
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« Reply #3 on: March 09, 2010, 09:12:44 AM » |
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Yeah, it was the incorrect segment. I'll fix it tonight.
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« Reply #4 on: March 09, 2010, 12:33:58 PM » |
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Best Moment Jaymz and the New God. I'm now drooling at the prospect of seeing these Final Trials. Of course, the change to Chapter II might change this one. We'll see after it's posted. Best Face Not really a banner night for faces. Despite that, Mal had a good night. Best Heel Intrepid. I love the “I was wrong” stipulation. Haven't seen that one before. MVP of the Night RJ for winning the Elite Eight. See you at Retribution, my friend. Overall Thoughts Just a note. When writing matches, try not to steal someone else's big championship moment by making it all about yourself. Just sayin'.  But overall, the show was decent. Not phenomal, but certainly well within the realm of readability. Of course, the general tardiness of the show dealt a major hit.  |
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Commercial: Barston Fortune Cookies: With words of wisdom that actually mean something.
Wrote the Match Of The Year, twice.
Former handler of Lucas Black
Two Time WWA World Champion. Birthday Bash 08 to Revolution 09 and March 6th, 2010 to June 6th, 2010.
WWA Television Champion. October 20th, 2008 to Birthday Bash 08
Handler of Havoc:
Tag Team of the Year, 2002
Tag Team of the Year, 2005
Comeback of the Year, 2005
Six-Time and Final WWA Tag Team Champions.
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« Reply #5 on: March 09, 2010, 01:10:49 PM » |
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The extra-curicular activity after the Title match was okayed by the higher-ups. I would have edited it out if it wasn't. File it under "heels are dicks".  |
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« Reply #6 on: March 09, 2010, 01:32:58 PM » |
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Best Moment: Black winning the title. He's a beast and it'll take an equal beast to take him down.
Best Face: I'm going with John Grant. One of my goals writing the Sole Survivor Match was to make John Grant really shine, and I hope I succeeded.
Best Heel: RJ Stone and Lucas Black are tied up here. Man, them battling it out is gonna be exciting, though awkward with the whole heel/heel dynamic.
MVP of the Night: We've got a new champion, so I think there's little question.
Overall Thoughts: Got a bit of a gripe. I'm not sure what was going on, but there were a LOT of errors in the Retribution Rundown segment. While it was awesome to set up the PPV, I didn't enjoy the read because of all the mistakes in there. Sorry if I'm shitting on anyone, but that was my biggest complaint.
Otherwise, I thought the show was badass. A new champion and a new number one contender and a lot of angles getting played out makes me smile. I hope everyone enjoys the Sole Survivor Match, as it was my first big multi-man match and I busted my ass on it.
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« Reply #7 on: March 09, 2010, 03:34:41 PM » |
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The extra-curicular activity after the Title match was okayed by the higher-ups. I would have edited it out if it wasn't. File it under "heels are dicks". Noted. I hereby humbly retract my earlier statement. Thank you for clarifying. |
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--As seen on Fiesta--
Commercial: Barston Fortune Cookies: With words of wisdom that actually mean something.
Wrote the Match Of The Year, twice.
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Two Time WWA World Champion. Birthday Bash 08 to Revolution 09 and March 6th, 2010 to June 6th, 2010.
WWA Television Champion. October 20th, 2008 to Birthday Bash 08
Handler of Havoc:
Tag Team of the Year, 2002
Tag Team of the Year, 2005
Comeback of the Year, 2005
Six-Time and Final WWA Tag Team Champions.
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« Reply #8 on: March 09, 2010, 03:42:25 PM » |
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Not a problem. I understand your concerns. In your shoes, I'd be a little pissed too. But you're suppose to be or at least your character should be.
As for the issues with the Rundown, it was very quickly written by me, I didn't get a chance to proofread it. I'll do so tonight when I update Chapter II.
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« Reply #9 on: March 10, 2010, 04:07:37 PM » |
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Best MomentRJ becoming the #1 contender. I am truly looking forward to this at the PPV. Best FaceJohn Grant. I am incredibly hyped about how this young wrestler is confidently rising to every occasion and showing the Fans why he should be the babyface of the company. It's really  seeing this character shine. (Lets just hope he don't end up like a John Cena or something. ) LOL Best HeelLucas Black. He is a freakin' machine.  MVP of the NightI'm going with Watkins on this. It is his against all odd attitude that has me hooked and locked in to see what he'll do. And then despite it all, he continues to maintain the face in himself. Overall ThoughtsNone |
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« Reply #10 on: March 10, 2010, 11:09:22 PM » |
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Updated the show.
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